Blog Prewriting 2

“Founded in 2008, Street Etiquette showcases style using a cultural, historical and urban perspective. With sartorial influences stretching from all parts of the world and eras, Street Etiquette has managed to assemble a truly unique view of fashionable menswear,” writes editor Joshua Kissi of the esteemed fashion blog, Street Etiquette. Street Etiquette mixes up a sweet blend of street style apparel, music, and culture. The blog aspires to supply readers with quality street wear styling and tips. Avid blog readers with high interest in fashion and culture will find Street Etiquette to contain much cultural information, vibrant colors and video quality, and credible style guidance.

From extravagant explorations in Africa, to photographing shows at New York fashion week, Street Etiquette is reining over the fashion blogging world with an iron fist. The vivid color and impressive video quality within the blog will catch reader’s attention. The people immersed in the fashion and music world will be enthused by the plethora of ‘street style’ tips and links to current or new clothing stores. Informing readers about various cultures around the world is another goal of Street Etiquette. The editor’s, Joshua Kissi and Travis Gumbs, present insight into the origin of clothing, but the affect it has on the people.

In the first paragraph, I struggled with thinking of a thesis statement that covered the topics assigned. I wasn’t sure how to separate the content of the blog into three parts. For the second, it was difficult to make the paragraph flow. This was due to the lack of format; it made it harder to stay on the main subjects. I was inspired by the broadness of the blog. There is much variation on topics, and it is structured beautifully.


Things to notice:
1. Word Structure
2. Page Format
3. Color Schemes
4. Credibility of Information
5. Frequency in Posts
6. Forum Responses
7. Variation in Language
8. Consistency in Writing
9. Grammar
10. Interaction with Followers